Good art, good story, interesting idea, but her abilities- especially the grenades and the scorpion back thing- seem really overpowered out of place, and just plain weird. Maybe, instead of all the crazy, convoluted stuff that's there, you could have actually implemented a poison mechanic. And it would make more sense if instead of shooting out claws, she just shot poison darts or some toxic chemical. But I definitely think that, with a little work, she could become an interesting, totally viable character if you just think of more stuff for abilities.
... Excuse me, it's called, "creativity" and "Using your imagination". If I used poison effects for her, then she'd be the opposite of Mercy. I apologize, but I'll be keeping her info the way it is.
Oh, I understand completely. I wasn't suggesting you change anything. I was just talking about the things I, personally, think are wrong with it. Also, what's wrong with being the opposite of an existing character? I personally find that it helps with originality. I just found it kind of odd that you didn't include a single poison mechanic for a character based on one of the most notoriously poisonous animals on the planet. It was definitely creative, but some of the abilities felt a bit out of place for me.
Maybe, instead of all the crazy, convoluted stuff that's there, you could have actually implemented a poison mechanic.
And it would make more sense if instead of shooting out claws, she just shot poison darts or some toxic chemical.
But I definitely think that, with a little work, she could become an interesting, totally viable character if you just think of more stuff for abilities.
Excuse me, it's called, "creativity" and "Using your imagination". If I used poison effects for her, then she'd be the opposite of Mercy. I apologize, but I'll be keeping her info the way it is.